Andrea!! This piece is "A name of what's named" I mean it's small as its title. The words hidden in between its folds bear volumes of meanings. I loved your double wording style in most of the lines ... so enticing. My favorite words here are the first and the last [Poetic & spirit]. |
by Wild flower
Small thats true, but huge in what ut says:) |
by Tara Kay
When you said that small poems can be the best, and hold the most meaning, you were not wrong, this is awesome, I love how the title is simple and enticing, and then when you read it, you get a sense of what we are here. |
by ah satan 666
@.@!!! |
by Baby Rainbow
Only you can create this much power in 20 words. |
by Darren
This isn't small enough, I reckon with a bit of effort you could have got this down to 16 words............. |