by Skyler
This is funny and sad to me. "Love thy neighbor" was written before we could talk to people worlds away. |
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by Gwen
That was fantastic! I think you've just become one of my favorites |
by The Jew
I have read some of your poems tonight and it seems to me that you are one of the few gifted writers on this site. Although I despise most of the rhyming poetry that I read online yours was quiet captivating at times :) but what really made my write you a comment is that how clever and creative you are with words and images throughout a poem... |
Fantastic write! flawless and unique. i loved it! |
Fantastic write! flawless and unique. i loved it! |
by LittleMsPink
Damn, i never get tired of reading this over and over, this is like ... AWESOME ! |
by anand singh
Very beautiful piece you penned here. In only a few words you got the message out clear and loud. An enjoyable read. |
by Anonymous Me
I enjoyed this. It is thought provoking and your flow was amazing. Thank you for sharing. |
by yogi73
Haha! what a clever and original poem, and a bit of a lingering question at the end adds to its charm. |
by Tim
Truly amazing. Such a great idea to write about, very throughout and thoroughly thought about language was chosen. You're really smart and talented with your approach to writing. May God be with you, friend. |
by Jessica
Wow very powerful. Great write. |
by DarkLight
My thoughts on this poem. |
by zvikov
Hehehe, this is a nice poem indeed. |
Really liked this one Michael nice mix of technology and religion |
by East Poetry
Love it |