Nice love poem, words a woman would love to hear from the man she loves. Keep up the good work.

In this line, "Your my passion, my endless lust" Your should be You are or You're.

Ohh this I must say is such a sweet loving write of passion. I liked the smoothness of the flow and the subtle rhymes that made it enjoyable! Very nicely written!

I remember you being called king of romantic poems in club & you have simply justified the same with this one...loved it :)

all the best & take care

Wow, this is a very seductive piece... nice one...
i like it! 5/5 for you

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Best poem I have read in a very long time