Comments : Alter Ego (part II)

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Somehow this poem leaves me with the feeling that I know you better and that, to me, is the beauty of expreesing true feelings

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      I'd planned to never let this one see the light of day, but your comment confirms that I made the right decision to share it. Thanks :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    The first two stanza as I understand is a comparison between you and her. I like your use of your name, it's a unique idea. This piece is also a good definition of you. I loved it.

    • 11 years ago

      by Rusheena

      Thanks, I'd never planned to share this one, but if I did, I wasn't going to use my name. But when I was revising it, I realized that it wouldn't be as candid, without it.