Hey Rach. NICE poem i mena dude ur great and i kinda know whats going on u know..... hope its al right. i know *shes* always the one who helps u and.. i gotta be there for MY best friend right now cuz of that kinda of concept.. if ur confugled... just ask...n ill explain FEEL FREE! read some of me poems LatR bye

*Kellie*

hey hey rachael, that was a great pom and the repetitiveness added a huge amount of effect and made it catchier.
check out som of my new poems if u can

xxoo,
alysse