Evening in May

by Maple Tree   Jan 11, 2013


I decomposed

my lifeless heart

as the sky bore

shades of tears,

an evening in May

cried

for every ache

that passed by,

I knew your

soul was part

of mine,

for a new birth

was born the night

tragedy said

goodbye,

and true love

whispered

hello....

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  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this Andrea, I can relate, it just made me feel like everything that ruined me, made me stronger to start again, that every time I feel like it's the end, tomorrow shall be a new beginning, it is sad, but hopeful, inspiring and sweet,
    I love it,
    x

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I love this!!! Reminds me of "Every story has an end, but in life every end is just a new beginning"...beautiful....Funny how we cry over something and in an instant we find something that is much sweeter than what we were crying for. Thats why I stopped crying at endings, because there has to be something sweeter meant for me.

    Awesome write!

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen

    Great piece with such a sad ending. It doesnt matter if they're gone, you can always keep them in a special place in your heart.

    :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Wooow this is truly amazing. I can't choose a fav part, amazing I LOVE this:)

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