I really like the layout of this and how the word comes before the after thoughts of it.

Cheeks-
Scarlet red; don't look at me that way.
I can't help but smile like a fool who
is staring at her dream and you do nothing
but unintentionally make me feel embarrassed
for even feeling this way.

- this is such a pwoerful affect for someone to do this to us without them even knowing it or meaning to. It kind of makes me think of butterflies in my stomach and how soemone can put them there without knowing they do. I also find it very fascinating that when we are embarrassed, it shows instantly through our cheeks, that has always amused me.

Words-
I...I...You...Well, honestly darling, I just
can't seem to spit out a single word that
taste disgusting because everything about
you is so appetising. Leaving me completely
ravenous for you. Hunger pains teasing me.

- really good detail here of how deep these feelings go and how they are the only thhing on your mind, that even your body craves it like it is starved of food.

Sleep-
Is there such a thing? My mind now my matress;
my thoughts more comfortable than my bed. I
tussle between the sheets of my wonderment
and if rest was ever needed, I'd have to find it
in your arms because I can't relax til I get there.

- love the idea of the matress and the mind, very clever. It is amazing how the mind works and how it can keep us awake with these thoughts. It stands out that if you had them beside you it would be easy to just drift off to a beautiful sleep.

Dreams-
So realistic, vivid, so impossible to read it seems,
but there is something about you, something about
that magical smile, those eyes, that happiness in
your soul, it makes me want to defeat the undefeated.
No length seems too far if youre the end result.

- love the magic in this stanza, showing the power their love has on you and how it makes you feel like there is nothing you can't do when you have this love. You create a small image of this other person being almost fairytale like and like a prince charming figure that makes you melt.

Flustered-
All of me. My expressions, my thoughts, my words..
I don't know where to go from here. What to tell
myself. Whether to ignore this or just let it be. I
am overly, compassionately, confidently sure this
confusion is going to live permenantly in my mind.

- I can understand the thought process throughout this and how something this magical can be scary and confusing to believe in so we doubt whether to act upon it or not, but what is meant to be will always find a way to be.

another great poem x

Utterly beautiful, I feel speechless after reading this and I don't honestly have much more to say about it! I loved the whole wonder of dreaming about this person and going into what it means to be flustered over them. That confusion and sense of constancy too was powerful also, all you know is that it probably won't go away for a while.....Great write :]