Can You Bring Me Back From Hell? </3

by La Reina De Corazones   Jan 12, 2013


As I lay in the dark waters,
Hearing so many sad voices crying out my name,
It all starts to sound the same,
And then I hear a man's voice call me babe,

They know I was a vixen doll queen,
But to him I was tame,
Tame and sweet, oh how it all sounds lame!
Then I start to ponder when will this insanity end?

Going back in time,
Seeing how it all truly began,
How a man and a woman met under certain circumstances,
Then the story repeats constantly over the centuries,
When will a love story differ from the repeated others?

Upon that dark light,
Eyes stared holes into my eyes with such fright,
That saw through all my lies,
How I'm not strong but weak,
But in the end we shall meet,
In death's sweet and solid embrace,
In his embrace I can even wear pretty clothing made in lace!

Go right ahead and kiss me soundly,
But don't cry that loudly,
When you find out I have been hurt that badly,
So take pity and end my life kindly,
Won't you take pity on me?

Carry me in your sweet white wings,
Let the concerns float away,
So I can hear,
"Babe wake up we are here",

Bring me back to life,
Save me from this never-ending pain,
And finally make me whole once again,
Please that's all that's gonna save me from letting go....

A/N i know i normally don't do first person but i can't seem to find my talent people i kinda lost it when i didn't write oh well

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  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Very good. I love it

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is amazing:)
    Beautiful as it unfolded:)
    Keep writing!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Wow, this poem is amazing I like how you refer to the typical love story and gave the readers insight into the life of the dead. Truly real love awaken us from the dead feelings we may process and heal wounds that we weren't aware exist. This poem is emotional and penned well.

    Great poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by sun spots

    I like the bit about the story of love repeating itself over the centuries.Its a story that will never change unless we all end up living forever.
    I like it luv.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    I love this. It is marvelous. I was kinda shocked reading it but I like it. I love how the emotions just flowed through it and how the force was just amazing. I love it mommy. :3 5/5

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