by La Reina De Corazones Jan 12, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As I lay in the dark waters, |
Very good. I love it |
by Amreen
This is amazing:) |
Wow, this poem is amazing I like how you refer to the typical love story and gave the readers insight into the life of the dead. Truly real love awaken us from the dead feelings we may process and heal wounds that we weren't aware exist. This poem is emotional and penned well. |
by sun spots
I like the bit about the story of love repeating itself over the centuries.Its a story that will never change unless we all end up living forever. |
I love this. It is marvelous. I was kinda shocked reading it but I like it. I love how the emotions just flowed through it and how the force was just amazing. I love it mommy. :3 5/5 |