Comments : Daredevil (syntuit in dialogue)

  • 11 years ago

    by Darren

    I think this is very funny, I check every slice of bread for mould and as for milk!!!
    I will not drink milk the day before its expiry date.
    You have given me an idea for a poem, I love the speech layout so I think I am going to take this and have a senryu arguing with a haiku.
    I love how the punctuation is more important than the words, without it in this piece your poem would lose so much of the high drama.