by Maple Tree Jan 13, 2013
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
She drowned in sorrow |
This is true beauty Andrea! I really don't know what to say like Chelsey too, you leave us breathless. Such a precious write, I felt every word flowed into the next and a voice was being heard...I like how you mentioned the word legacy, because to me that's a very powerful and moving concept. Her legacy will be remembered, and her soul rooted within so many spirits who will listen to her. This reminded me of a parable because you illustrate these principles, these beautiful truths, especially the bigger picture of death being life. |
by Chelsey
Oh my gosh.....I think..I have found my favorite nature piece from you...this is incredibly beautiful. I mean seriously, I find this to be perfection....I have this urge to break it down stanza by stanza, but my tongue feels tied because over all, everything about this is just flawless....Adding it to my faves, this one got to me. |
by Wild flower
Woow!!! Thats all I can say, this poem says a lot, that I dont know where to start. |