Comments : Pleasure

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is beautiful. The pursuit of pleasure is like a blinding light, and it can be that shiny object that distracts us. But counterfeit joy will compare to the real thing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is splendid... I like the rhymes and the beautiful message conveyed.
    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is splendid... I like the rhymes and the beautiful message conveyed.
    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Like always, it was a pleasure reading