Blur

by Aubrey   Jan 14, 2013


The days blur together
hours flying by
Minutes ticking away
I sit here
Waiting for my life to began
Hoping one day
I can be me
And not everything
You want me to be.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    "begin" should be begin.

    Other than that, the ending hit home for me. This is well-written. And life teaching :)

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      :) thanks:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I hope that day comes for you soon, Aubrey.

    This is a nice little poem, only one little typo I see...began should be begin.

    Great job

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