Comments : Anti Surface

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I wish you to gaze upon me again
    as it were any other winter day
    do not think of me as broken
    ^ that is my favorite part in this entire poem since most people want that soo much.... the poem in general is very dark and very beautiful sweetie! 5/5

    Queen Ash

    • 11 years ago

      by Weeping Willow

      Thank you soo much. it was the first thing i wrote since i stopped and went thru this whole life change. it just poured out that way

  • 1 year ago

    by Ink

    Hi there, this is such and involved write, wonderfully dark with so much imagery I was swimming in it. Wonderfully written! Regards Ink