Once loved </3

by Bryanna   Jan 14, 2013


I sit here waiting for the end

As it creeps closer and closer.

I pray it will take me first.

I understand the only way out of this hell is to leave

But if I don't belong anywhere.

or with anyone

Then where should I go?

The only place to go is out in my world.

So again I wait hopeing

Praying that it will end today

Tomorrow

Soon.

Im sick of everything that happened.

People say god has a plan.

I say god is dead

God hates me

God will never come back

And save the forgotten soul

I believe he once loved </3

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  • 11 years ago

    by onethuscome

    Read your poem.for all its pessimism the fact of expressing it implies hope and optimism.a purely dark outlook would just wallow in uncreative self-pity feeling sorry for herself which your poem does "not' suggest.your very name implies to me light and warmth and ur writing shows a poetess at heart.

    • 11 years ago

      by Bryanna

      Ok i didnt fully understand that comment... but thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryanna

    Thanks. But it was supose to be about like god once loved me but he forgot about me and and just left me to die

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    I truly believe that everyone was once loved its how we deal that changes how we will love in the future. This poem is in my opinion a modern take on the classic heart break. I truly aprreciate it thank you for sharing

  • 11 years ago

    by Bryanna

    Thanks :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Very good Hun :-) 5/5

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