by Dominique Lewis Jan 14, 2013
category :
Life, society /
other
Tick tock says my very annoying grandfather clock, |
by Mohan
Beautiful written. |
Thank you. |
Okay this is really cool poem daughter! it started out until the middle it reminded me of Peter Pan if you read the book or seen the movie lol anyways i really like how you went from one thing to another yet it still held on to the poem perfectly my dear daughter!!! 5/5 |
Thank you mother. I thought I would write something new and different. And well this is what came out of it. |
Okay this is really cool poem daughter! it started out until the middle it reminded me of Peter Pan if you read the book or seen the movie lol anyways i really like how you went from one thing to another yet it still held on to the poem perfectly my dear daughter!!! 5/5 |
by Let It Be
As I chase down the moving light as a cat would chase the mouse, |
You are welcome and I fixed it. I didn't realize that I did that. Thank you for telling me. |