by zombiepikachu Jan 14, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Her dream catcher |
Very nice. it flowed greatly and I can feel the emotions |
by Rusheena
This is great! There are a few grammar and punctuations errors, but other than that, this is a 5/5. I was hooked from the first stanza. It's a just little snippet, but I didn't want it to end. Good work, Z! |
I like it Hun :-) |
Thank you! C: |