Funny, even though there was repetition in this piece, each stanza I kept picture someone dive deeper and it was getting blacker and blacker as I got to the end of this. nice imagery with that......

I hate this feeling Saffie, but you know what, sometimes we can't wait for people to save us and we have to kick back to the surface ourself.....even when we feel like we've forgotten how to swim.

Very nice piece as always.

Wow, this is a strong piece. I love the imagery you used, i could litterally see someone struggling to get back to the top. I love it

Imagination that I seen in this piece is amazing.
Would love to read more from you. Nice!