Mother of mine

by Aubrey   Jan 15, 2013


I see a pale gray world
worse than before
but i will pretend
that my world is right again
i will show you a smiling face
ill do whatever it takes
so you can have a piece of mind
mother of mine.

*we all made mistakes...none of it was your fault..i love you.

-A

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  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This is a sweet piece-that you are willing to pretend or do whatever it takes to make sure momma is happy.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      I do anything for mommy:) lol thanks so much:)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I agree with paul, I like the tone this piece has is comforting. I hope your mom reads this.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Umm...I don't know about that.....but thanks:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Nice, very nice..love your comforting words of assurance to the woman that gave birth to you. Sweet and lovely. i would suggest you capitalize your 'I's and also add some commas here and there but apart from that, this piece is amazing dear.

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