Nice, very nice..love your comforting words of assurance to the woman that gave birth to you. Sweet and lovely. i would suggest you capitalize your 'I's and also add some commas here and there but apart from that, this piece is amazing dear.

I agree with paul, I like the tone this piece has is comforting. I hope your mom reads this.

This is a sweet piece-that you are willing to pretend or do whatever it takes to make sure momma is happy.