Jumbled

by Aubrey   Jan 15, 2013


Thoughts are leaving me helpless
jumbling in my head
with my heart cold and dead
scars become anew
when i thought there were few
pain becoming my friend
as it laces my heart
stabbing me like a dart.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I am fascinated by your rhyming scheme, i have never been good at it so you inspire me to write better stuff, amazing once again. Your work has never dissapointed me.

    • 11 years ago

      by Aubrey

      Wow....thanks:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    See, even when your thoughts are jumbled, you can create a poem out of it! :) Inspiration is everywhere.

    Nice rhyming scheme.

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thanks:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Very good love :-)

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