Would you care

by Kelwin lost in thought   Jan 15, 2013


Would you care
if I ended it all
if I told you today was my last day
if I blew my brains out

would you care
if I told you I love you
if I carved your name in my arm
if I spent my life with you

would you care
if I died
if I lost myself to the dark
if I was crying

would you care
if I never loved you
if I left you forever
if I forgot about you

would you care
if I came up missing
if someone kidnaped me
if someone killed me

so would you care

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  • 11 years ago

    by Bryanna

    Very good.. i know exactly what ya mean

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.

    I would care. You're so much stronger than I think you know.

    I like how you start each stanza with "would you care" and add more questions.

    The last line, you should take out the "so".

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.
    Yes.

    I would care. You're so much stronger than I think you know.

    I like how you start each stanza with "would you care" and add more questions.

    The last line, you should take out the "so".

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