I love the powerful differences you've used here to depict the strong-willed mind and the ever-graceful heart. a good write, i enjoyed reading it! (:

This reminds me of Bens old poem "Storms of heart and mind"....and I also wrote a similar poem once...found it ironic that three poets wrote on this topic, but thats what makes this poem so relatable....We all have battled the storm between the heart and mind....they are two very different things and always tell us the opposite things to do, we never know which to follow...

I love the details here, I love the topic, because again, its something we ALL go through..I feel perhaps maybe writers go through it a little more..because we write from the heart, yet think from our mind..where as a lot of people don't even differentiate the two.

Well done doll!

Truly worthy of being called poetry!