If You Really Knew Me

by CathyButterflyJC   Jan 16, 2013


If you really knew me you'd know how much I hurt over my best friend and her hard times. If you really knew me you'd know that I write so I don't fall apart. If you really knew me you'd see inside my heart the scars and why they are in so far.

If you really knew me you'd know I use to be shy and why I have to be strong. If you really knew me you'd know most of my writing is a send out to my friends. If you really knew me you'd know that writing is who I am and not to treat it any differently than my need to breathe.

If you really knew me, then you'd know why Natalie means the world to me, why I always talk about her and why her and I tell others that we're a package deal. If you really knew me you'd know why my faith is everything, and I will fight for it as well as for woman's rights. If you really knew me you'd understand my heart.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is great because it shows that what you write is what you are - and you show parts of why you are this person. I like it because even though I don't know you , I get the sense of the person you are which is a very strong minded and dedicated person. Especially to her writing and her friends.

    I love the pride in it, that you will not change who you are because it is you! And I also like how you end it with getting to know your heart, because if you truly know someone, then you are right, you should know their heart!

    Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by xxOutcastQueenxx

    I love this. When I read this one word I thought of was strength. It shows you have strength. I love how close you and your friend Natalie are. I have one friend who is the same way for me. You write with so much feeling I love it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Wow. Very very good. I love it!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Austin

    Very good poem its interesting

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    Awe. Honey, I love it. You paint a fragile picture of yourself... but with a strong main character. :)

    It is lovely and most definitely true!

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