Awe. Honey, I love it. You paint a fragile picture of yourself... but with a strong main character. :)

It is lovely and most definitely true!

Very good poem its interesting

Wow. Very very good. I love it!!

I love this. When I read this one word I thought of was strength. It shows you have strength. I love how close you and your friend Natalie are. I have one friend who is the same way for me. You write with so much feeling I love it.

This is great because it shows that what you write is what you are - and you show parts of why you are this person. I like it because even though I don't know you , I get the sense of the person you are which is a very strong minded and dedicated person. Especially to her writing and her friends.

I love the pride in it, that you will not change who you are because it is you! And I also like how you end it with getting to know your heart, because if you truly know someone, then you are right, you should know their heart!

Well done