OMGoodness this is sooo powerful, I love this poem, it speaks to me, it is so inspirational, :) 100/100

I love this! <It can break you. It can make you want to end it all.> These lines though i stumbled over cause my mind wanted to say, It can break you or it can make you. And then it would turn the next part into, It can make you want to end it all.

Over all i see nothing else that bothers me cause it truly was written well with a great flow.

Wow i liked the way into which you discribe the life and u'r right ...

Life is full of misery love hate and pain ...liked it :)

keep up 5/5