True me
by Kelwin lost in thought Jan 16, 2013
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The true me is not the guy you see. I'm a monster a mistake. I mess up everything. I am a cutter. I hurt those I love. I lose everyone who is important to me. I'm a screw up. What am I to do. Change for you or be who I am. I know who I am and I won't lie. I've made alot of mistakes. My arms is proof to that. You may see me as a monster but I'm a monster who cares. My arms is my scarlet letter. My body is it's tempel. But who am I to you. |
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11 years ago
Kel, you are not a monster. You are a human like the rest of us. Everyone acts differently. If there's one thing I learned, its that I should be who I am and not be someone else. For example, my dad wants me to be a good student, but I screw up every time. That is just who I am. I'm a screw up, but that shouldn't matter to no one but you. You should never listen to other people because they don't know the real you.
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11 years ago
by Natasha
You never really a monster. But that's what people thought of you, so you might as well just admitted yourself. This, what you're doing is beautiful. It's a relief, and it isn't wrong ~ but, do stay strong, okay?
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11 years agoby dalllllal
So touching
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11 years ago
by Kate
Oh Kelwin. You're not a monster and not a mistake. The scars on your arms shouldn't represent you're mistake like Hester, it should show your strength. You're strong enough to find a refuge in cutting rather than suicide. Yes, it isn't the perfect situation but the world could always be without you Kelwin if you had taken a different route. This world wouldnt be the same.
You are a beautiful guy.-
11 years ago
Awww thanks Hun :-)
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11 years ago
I love it, beautifully written and splendid work
