I told you

I really loved it. Its spit in my face and also could you seperate each line and sentence with a period or comma. Rejection hurts and you expressed it perfectly.

This is cute to me for some twisted dark sence of humor this reminds me when in the past i never told anyone to die but i do remember someone telling me to die since i seem to have broken his heart... sorry person ANYHOW the poem has a dark sweet bitterish mix in it that it intreges me and has me saying "wow! can't you be any more heartless?" but over all i find it to have a slight error or idk but it seems to need a little more in it for me anyways...4/5

Queen Ash

I love this. Its powerful and emotional. It flows together nicely and the wording never seems forced dear. 5/5 <3

She doesn't know who she was pushing away, she was missing out on the most amazing guy the world has to over, INCREDIBLE POEM