Comments : The Red One

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    The red one..must be the devil huh. loved your rhyme. Darkness drips.

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    NICE WRITE!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Scary. This one's like a heavy metal song or horror movie soundtrack thingy. But anyways, what Im trying to say is that this is a well written poem. I like it a lot.

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Deep and perfect. I just love the way you described the devil here. This is Amazing:)