by MikaMad15 Jan 19, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Pop a pill, |
by JaM
I certainly enjoyed the intro of the poem. It gave me a good idea as to what the subject of the poem would be about. There is only one minor spelling mistake; on the 7th line, you missed the "o" in broken. Overall, it's a good write indeed. |