by CRAFTY KEN Jan 19, 2013
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
What a walk! |
by Dark Secrets
The beginning is nice. I like the imagery and the journey you showed in your poem. Again, spacing is important here, and quotes should be on their own as a note. Try to rephrase quotes from the bible and relate them to you. Take a look at my "Missing piece found" and you'll understand what I mean. |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks Zahra, I see what you mean with this poem and a few/many others and I am thinking of revising and entering them again, I think my Rose without thorns would be well received. |
I really liked this poem, it could change lives, bring others closer to the faith, I bet God, Jesus and Mary are looking down on you and smiling. |
by CRAFTY KEN
You bet! I pray that the Lord will help you and your best friend! |
by Marvellous
The best that can happen, is find. The best treasure to find, is Truth. Indeed beautifully worded. Good to learn from you again, bro! |
by CRAFTY KEN
Thanks brother, glad the Lord found me and had mercy and compassion on me seeing my condition as he does with many. |