Jet Ski Of Life

I knew your work reminded of someone, but I didn't know who, until now. You have a similar style as Emily D. (I couldn't spell out her last name b/c it was considered inappropriate). It's sporadic and provides specific images, while leaving the rest for the reader to interpret, and the way you capitalize certain words, normally seen as incorrect, is visually appealing. It's a very rare style that may not be as appreciated today, but you definitely make it your own.

As for the poem, itself, I really like the message and the metaphor of skiing. Life is a rush, full of bumpy slopes, and sometimes, you get hurt. But you have to get back up and strap on that ski. (Sorry for being so cheesy, haha.) Nice job, Andrew!