Your storytelling and rhyme abilities are superb Lillie.

From start to finish, the excitement never stops. Very good storytelling. This poem is awesome.

Superlative Work Lillie!!!

Wow words are hard to described this one 5/5

I almost cried when I read this, oh my goodness this is so sad, it tore me apart as I read this, wonderful story, you really have a talent for this, outstnading flwo and describtion and heart put into it, incredible poem, loved it