The Watcher and the Bull

by Larry Chamberlin   Jan 20, 2013


Centered, hidden in front of bushes, behind a porch
and over a slat Carmen peers at an unseen man;
headlights from the street turn night a hideous yellow;
a shadowy bullish ghostly figure lies lower left.

Off stage to the right, Murray stands at bay,
hands held not up or down but in full view,
as ordered, with the look of death on his face.

Only Carmen knows what happened:
witnessed Murray's mindless descent
from enamored suitor to jealous
bull locking horns with his rival.

Carmen had been sitting on the cool porch
in evening air, flirting with Felix standing below,
her legs brushing his sides lightly, a whisper.

That's how Murray found them;
entering with a roar he charged,
butted Felix hard, breaking a porch leg,
then hauled him to his feet for more.

Blood poured down Felix's head,
stained red the porch leg where it lay;
he threw his punches blindly hooking only air.

The brutish men bellowed murder;
Murray knocked Felix down again
stomped his neck with a horrible crack!
Before Felix could turn he was ended.

Murray stood snorting despair; seeking pardon,
saw his true form in Carmen's hate-filled eyes;
sirens, then lights spotted him: a bull in the ring.

Inspiration (for a contest by Everlasting):
"I stared at myself in the mirror, wondering what she saw that I didn't." - Sherri Lee Emmons
and http://www.flickr.com/photos/joses_artwork/2760838894/lightbox/
Footnotes: Murray = Miura, the finest fighting bulls of Spain. One of them, Reventon, killed bullfighter Felix Guzman in Mexico in 1943. Felix, aka Felice Kutmann Schopenhauer, left a pregnant widow, Carmen Rovira.
[Objects: the girl; the bushes behind her; the slat over which she is looking; the porch; the bloody porch leg on the ground; the headlights; a bull's head in the lower left corner; Metaphor: a bull fight over a mate.]

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Mr. Larry

    If it wasn't for this poem, I wouldn't have been able to spot the lady and the bull. With all due respect, you have a nice eye. I enjoyed this piece and how the items were incorporated in the poem. If I am not mistaken, you were the only who incorporated more items than the requested ones and who linked them together to create this story. I admired the creativity as well as your writing skills and also the incorporation of names within this piece.

    5/5

    • 11 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      Thank you. You may have already figured it out, but this was the second poem from that picture. The first is titled Unwritten is Unknown. Once I picked out those pieces, the first poem was wholly unsuited & promptly forgotten.

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