I loved the message in this piece T, and I also loved the rhyme scheme you adopted in this piece. It all flowed nicely. What I loved the most is this line..

"Losing is a great mentor"
^^
This is so true. To lose is the best way for you to learn. You get to know what it is that you did wrong so you wont fall into that same mistake again.

Great piece.
Nominated first thing on Monday :)

xxx

Clinging on to happiness,

Who wouldn't do that, but it is so full of pictures this poem, I like it much