This is brilliant, and creative.
I love the idea of the feathers shows a great amount of sadness, how you pluck the feathers one by one, shows how you maybe are giving up, and you dont want to dream and go on with life. It feels that you were forced you didnt want to do it, but you had to.
Great job Saffis, loved this:)

Beautiful this poem is so creative and touching I find myself speechless. There's so much sadness and emotions throughout this poem. I feel like you're telling a story about two lovers and one is draining the other person in the relationship of their emotions, self-esteem, and love.

Excellent 5/5