@.@!!!

Well I wasn't expecting that twist :O !!!

A sad stream like flow for the intro...

Then tone and imagery changes in a flash missy...

This one has left me with mixed feelings -_-

Great write as always <3

Into the favourites with your other tone thrillers @.@!!!

The ending is twisted ah... But good.
If put in those words I guess the punch from lips will be better than the kiss from fist... O_o

It's a sad piece saffie, when I was reading I could hear the I told you so... And I dislike hearing that for some reason. I guess everyone does. The poem left me wondering what the answer will be.