Ghosts of my past

A bit blunt, I think, and there's a little tense in the middle part of this poem.. But still, no hidden emotion. Means it's perfectly fine! Nice work, Kelwin!

OMGoodness, that is soooo sad, so much raw emotional, so much feeling bursting out of it, I love it!!

Awesome poem :)

I like it. But, I think you can do more with it. Develop it more and all. Plus, doing that can also dive into some old feelings and questions which will help get them out. :)

All in all. It's good.