I like it. But, I think you can do more with it. Develop it more and all. Plus, doing that can also dive into some old feelings and questions which will help get them out. :)

All in all. It's good.

Awesome poem :)

OMGoodness, that is soooo sad, so much raw emotional, so much feeling bursting out of it, I love it!!

A bit blunt, I think, and there's a little tense in the middle part of this poem.. But still, no hidden emotion. Means it's perfectly fine! Nice work, Kelwin!