I caught myself staring at this line.
Enchanting, addicting and interesting.
Because it the end of this piece.
But my opinion is it doesn't end there.
Almost like a start to something else.
This line made people wonder.
Because it makes me wonder;
Who doesn't?
(P/S: I love this piece, Luna!! You're amazing.) :D
11 years ago
by xXx Eternal PainxXx
Even my art gave up on me,
disposed me, like a lump
of petty poetry, finding triumph
in walking me home to the
bottom of a dust bin.
^^^ love the personification and it shows the raw pain very good poem!!! :) and don't worry poetry doesn't leave us it takes a break lol 5/5