Kill me

by Love Hurts   Jan 22, 2013


You cruelly scrap your nasty,
murderous fingers down my bare back.
Leaving darkening bruises as a path.
You breath is hot on my neck,
stinking of rotten food and strong licker.
I struggle beneath you, weak and abandoned.
My heart pounds against my chest, demanding release.
You ignore my pleads
as I beg for freedom.
You're gonna kill me.

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  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Sadly this does happen in the world

    You captured the the moment perfectly ...

    It took me back through every horror movie
    This was a really good piece :)

    Well done

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcy Lewis

    I hear the screaming on the inside of this silent girl. This gave me goosebumps. Great adjectives, dear. You're vocabulary is great. I sincerely hope this isn't true experience for you, but you write it as if you did.

    One spelling error, last line. Your/should be/You're.

    Favorited. I love this.

    • 11 years ago

      by Love Hurts

      Thank you for your compliment and help, I am grateful for both. Luckily, I never experienced this but it's truly awful that some girls have.

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