I hear the screaming on the inside of this silent girl. This gave me goosebumps. Great adjectives, dear. You're vocabulary is great. I sincerely hope this isn't true experience for you, but you write it as if you did.

One spelling error, last line. Your/should be/You're.

Favorited. I love this.

Sadly this does happen in the world

You captured the the moment perfectly ...

It took me back through every horror movie
This was a really good piece :)

Well done