My Final Goodbye(Edited/Revised Version)

by HiddenScars   Jan 22, 2013


Life is slowly slipping away,
I have nothing to live for.
I thought it'd get better one day,
But I won't tell those lies to myself anymore.

Emotionally I am dead,
Physically I'm still here.
I already let my tears shed,
And my many scars show in my shattered mirror.

So I break off another piece,
It's as sharp as a razor.
My emotions need to release,
So I press down until it hurts like a taser.

I've said my goodbyes to this place,
And there's no way to go back.
No one will remember my face,
'Cause everything people look for is what I lack.

I'm moving on to a new place,
Where there's more people like me.
The sinners and ones who disgrace,
Its name is Hell but it's better than this country.

So this is my final goodbye,
To this world I don't fit in.
People will miss me is a lie,
I can't go back now to fix things and re-begin.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    This is a great poem, but it was really hard to read. I loved the form, rhythm, and rhyme scheme. The sentiment, though tragic, was beautifully put together. I usually don't read these kinds of poems because there are so many of them on this site, and it breaks my heart. This reminds me of all the times I thought the same way and said I'd do the same thing. I really hope that you aren't considering this option anymore, but if you still are, I'm just a message away.

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This is so sad because many people feel like they shouldn't be here and that they don't have a meaning or purpose. Through your words I can feel your pains and see the lack of happiness due to the emotional, physical and mentally scars that has afflicted.

    Well penned..