Love in Words

by Loveless Dreamer   Jan 22, 2013


You love is like the sun shining brightly
Slowly taking my breath away today
You kiss me passionately and lightly
As under the stars we peacefully lay

Holding me close, never letting me go
Whispering to each other sweet nothings
You trying to show me you love me so
Stealing my heart; the best of beginnings

Looking into my eyes with happiness
With your smile radiating your feelings
You're my John White; me your Pocahontas
Our love for each other is pure blessings

I have no words for what I feel for you
It's just too unreal to explain anymore

Written: January 21, 2013
This is a sonnet that I was to write for Creative Writing. Enjoy! I'd like some feedback please :)

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I think you wrote this perfectly, I loved every word, especially

    "Looking into my eyes with happiness
    With your smile radiating your feelings"
    and
    "As under the stars we peacefully lay

    Holding me close, never letting me go
    Whispering to each other sweet nothings
    You trying to show me you love me so
    Stealing my heart; the best of beginnings" those seven lines spoke to me, BEAUTIFUL! 100/100

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