This piece is so interesting! First, I love the rhymes, and ask anyone who knows me, I usually hate rhymes..but this had a nice little ring to it, my eyes bounced from line to line...

Second....Here are my thoughts on this. We must find our own way (with trust in Him to get us there), we must carry our own cross (and follow Him daily), we must write our own book (according to His purpose for us)....thats how I live my life anyways lol.

I really really enjoyed the story in this piece Andrew. Very interesting, you kept it simple and easy for your readers to understand. Well done.

I find so much depth in this piece... for I follow a different path however I can relate on a spiritual level with this... truly a powerful piece and I'm with Chels... love the rhyme shceme!!

I love how tight this is, you also build the drama just right and the end was good,

the authors notes help tremendously.
Like the rhyming scheme, helps pace this nicely and every word works here and compliments each other very well.

cleverly and professionally written.