My gosh it shows your pain in this poem and it just blew me away the emotions there the imagery in here makes me remember of my past very beautiful keep writting! :) 5/5

Queen Ashlin

This is a very cute poem. I love the use of your wording here. I love the use contrary at the end I think it fits perfectly. I love the emotion in this poem sad though. Its not great experiencing a broken heart. 5

Good poem strong lines good imagry really like it

Thanks to all of you:)