Fragile Spirit

by ah satan 666   Jan 23, 2013


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Joyce its not time to go, so come home and stay...
i know your wrestling demons that plague your way.
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A fragile vessel, yet mind tough as old boots...
i live in your memories, as you explain my roots.
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The words you've showered have touched and guided me...
have heart, be kind and always bless it be.
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A great grandma, nan, mother and best friend too...
this candle flame dances especially for you.
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A fiery sun by day, a shimmering moon at night...
you've always been my guiding light.
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~.*~ <3 ~*.~ <3 ~.*~ <3 ~*.~

For my nan...
Ooo she'll throttle me when she finds out i called her by her first name :/ ....
but I won't mind.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Ares

    Sweet poem! Good topic and nice, consisten rhyme scheme. Glad I read it!

    Ares

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ohhh Natasha I love this. It is beautiful and so loving in its tone.

    I got an idea of the relationship between you and how you learn all about your family history from her stories, and you believe you are the person you are because of the love she has showered you with and the many lessons she has taught you.

    I like the second last stanza and how you explain the candle shape and the reason behind it, a candle for this special lady in your life.

    Then you end the poem by showing everyone this lady is your light, sun by day and moon by night, and this is the noble and wise light that guides you on your way.

    What a beautiful tribute, it is lovely. <3

    Very talented you are!

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Sorry triple post...

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    My bad... a second unintentional post..

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I know i may sound like a copy cat but this is a fantastic write. at least i like the candle... but even more the content :) its sweet.

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