Comments : Haunted (updated)

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    My stories never end with
    they lived happily ever after,
    not with wine and a shallow laughter.

    ^^ i think there is no happily ever after...happiness it's just like a laugh.. after a few seconds or minutes? it goes away...

    and also it will feel strange if everything was just laughter...

    I like the poem, the above was what caught my attention the most, though, I know we agreed on a similar topic before :P so there is no much I can say.

  • 8 years ago

    by Maher

    "There are lost cities,
    all abandoned and forgotten.
    Blocked, empty streets
    with black trees scattered all around.
    The view clogged by thick fogs,
    by noises that never ease."

    Raniasaurus! Seeing you online led me to look at your work. Looking through your work led me to a title that stood out. That title then led me to the above verse and the above verse struck me as accurate. Amazing description. Thank you for sharing it :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Your comment led me to this reply, and this reply led me to appreciate your very kind words, thanks a lot, made my day.