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  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    I enjoyed reading this small piece piece Alexis.
    Lazy winter days are sometimes the best.
    Loved your ending. Write on.

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    I sense, this piece is very much different from normal. The way you write is truly marvellous. There's a great connection of nature I see in this poem. How calmly and justly you have written this. Wow!! So much appreciable. Winter is really a very fair season to spend the days of a life. Very impressive work. 5/5