Comments : Vanishing Point (double tanka)

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    The scene you penned here is heartbreaking, Larry. I honestly could feel the silence in that place; the stillness of the surroundings, and how you are just left with memories of what kept that place one alive for you.

    Been a while since a poem had moved me like this one.

    Grear write.
    xxx