by Baby Rainbow Jan 24, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It pierces your heart |
by Ares
For me this is a decent read, with good lines and a topic that a lot of people could relate to. The only thing I want to point out, negatively, is that one can get the feeling that the whole sense "of being rejected" can get a bit repetetive through-out the poem and instead one could get a touch more creative. But, other than that, great work! |